Hallo, har begynt å skrive rap lyrics på fritiden av og til på fritiden i den siste tiden..Tenkte jeg kunne legge ut en av tekstene mine her, og kanskje få noe ros og ris, og høre hva jeg eventuelt kan forbedre meg på i tekstene mine
"The real light
Im going to put you to your grave,
Erase your memory like a ps3 save,
And i am greatly ashamed,
That your dick is shaved,
Retarded mind equals a girl who is lame,
You know the story, it goes all the same,
And u better remember my fucking name,
Cause im the type to bring my family fame
Let me show you the real light,
im gonna make satan look so bright,
Compared to god,satan is a damn good boy,
Cause god is treatin us like som fuckin toy
I do my prayers, trying to reach heaven,
But cant seem to find any trust in number 7,
Climbing the ladder, one step at the time,
Hoping for eternal life to one day be mine,
Stretching my fingers, reachin for the skies,
But we all know heaven is a bunch of lies,
God gave my ladder a push, down i fell,
Im consumed by hate, in my own fuckin hell,
Let me show you the real light,
im gonna make satan look so bright,
Compared to god,satan is a damn good boy,
Cause god is treatin us like som fuckin toy
Pushed down from heaven, arisen from hell,
Thats the stories my grandsons are gonna tell,
Time for action, go grab your guns,
As we burn churches and rape their nuns
Cant trick me more, i have seen the real light,
My actions may seem wrong, but i know they're right
Let me show you the real light,
im gonna make satan look so bright,
Compared to god,satan is a damn good boy,
Cause god is treatin us like som fuckin toy
Imma release Fenris from his chains,
Cause hatred runs trough my veins,
Let him feast on flesh of the divine,
As we use mjollnir to break god's spine,
Ragnarök is gonna be born with our hate,
When god is dead,its a little too late,
Too late for regretion and prayers,
Cause hatred breaks trough all layers,
There is no rules when im rockin the mic,
Freedom of speech,dont care if u like,"
Er fortsatt på amatør stadiet, og skriver for moro av og til bare..men takker for all feedback!
"The real light
Im going to put you to your grave,
Erase your memory like a ps3 save,
And i am greatly ashamed,
That your dick is shaved,
Retarded mind equals a girl who is lame,
You know the story, it goes all the same,
And u better remember my fucking name,
Cause im the type to bring my family fame
Let me show you the real light,
im gonna make satan look so bright,
Compared to god,satan is a damn good boy,
Cause god is treatin us like som fuckin toy
I do my prayers, trying to reach heaven,
But cant seem to find any trust in number 7,
Climbing the ladder, one step at the time,
Hoping for eternal life to one day be mine,
Stretching my fingers, reachin for the skies,
But we all know heaven is a bunch of lies,
God gave my ladder a push, down i fell,
Im consumed by hate, in my own fuckin hell,
Let me show you the real light,
im gonna make satan look so bright,
Compared to god,satan is a damn good boy,
Cause god is treatin us like som fuckin toy
Pushed down from heaven, arisen from hell,
Thats the stories my grandsons are gonna tell,
Time for action, go grab your guns,
As we burn churches and rape their nuns
Cant trick me more, i have seen the real light,
My actions may seem wrong, but i know they're right
Let me show you the real light,
im gonna make satan look so bright,
Compared to god,satan is a damn good boy,
Cause god is treatin us like som fuckin toy
Imma release Fenris from his chains,
Cause hatred runs trough my veins,
Let him feast on flesh of the divine,
As we use mjollnir to break god's spine,
Ragnarök is gonna be born with our hate,
When god is dead,its a little too late,
Too late for regretion and prayers,
Cause hatred breaks trough all layers,
There is no rules when im rockin the mic,
Freedom of speech,dont care if u like,"
Er fortsatt på amatør stadiet, og skriver for moro av og til bare..men takker for all feedback!